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ClaySoul · 07-11-2005, 10:02 PM

I think the danger of having a long essay is also having uneeded or tangential information and corny flowery language. But if shortening your essay will significantly compromise your story/message -- don't do it!

07-11-2005, 10:02 PM	#51
ClaySoul Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Oregon / Providence Posts: 2,117	I think the danger of having a long essay is also having uneeded or tangential information and corny flowery language. But if shortening your essay will significantly compromise your story/message -- don't do it!