| anybody interested to look at my Cornell transfer essay??
hey guys! I am stressing out here......4 more days to go till deadline for Cornell, but I am stuck on this essay for CAS that I have been writing for a month now.....it requires me to
"discuss a quotation or personal motto that reflects your values and beliefs and tells us something about the kind of person you are"
Would anyone experienced like to read my essays, and show me what I could improve? I think I tried to put too much in there, and lost my focus..... Thank you so much in advance! |