College Discussion - View Single Post - Opinion needed on final line of Statement of Purpose

darkspym8 · 03-31-2008, 01:54 AM

Is this good for the final line of my statement of purpose?

"I look forward to the opportunity of joining the University of *** Computer Science department as a graduate student in a mutually beneficial association."

03-31-2008, 01:54 AM	#1
darkspym8 New Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Threads: 1 Posts: 1	Opinion needed on final line of Statement of Purpose Is this good for the final line of my statement of purpose? "I look forward to the opportunity of joining the University of *** Computer Science department as a graduate student in a mutually beneficial association."