| As an adult reader, I suggest that you reduce & refine your profile as it contains a lot of lines that become a bit monotonous due to its repetiveness. This is not a particularly strong resume since it lacks focused passion. It presents you as a "jack of all trades" & "master of none". I suspect that Princeton sees hundreds of these types of profiles each week during application season. You really need to distinguish yourself & your accomplishments in one or two areas. This is the prototypical "mile wide and an inch deep" profile. And I realize that my critique is somewhat harsh, but to leave it as is will not help your cause in my opinion. |