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Old 04-19-2008, 09:24 AM   #23
b@r!um
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Yes there are more errors in that sentence. Let's just look at the phrase "While you will be need new I-20". You already noted that an 'a' is missing. But what is the 'be' doing there? And why are the two pieces of information 'you will need a new I-20' and 'the time spent on a study abroad program will count towards your OPT eligibility' joined with a while clause? I also think that either 'spent' should be in a different tense or 'you' should be omitted but that would be minor issues.

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