| SoCal, you write well, but your essay should definitely express who you are in a highly personal way. The admissions people want to hear your voice, not just your opinion, even if you write well on a topic. Unless steroids have had some kind of role in your own life, I would write about something else.This is obviously just an opinion, but I would check out some of the college websites on essays. UVA and Tufts had some good examples last fall. I'd check them out. Good luck! |