| Thanks for all advice and comments from all of you.
Oops, I guess I forgot to say what this essay particularly for lol sorry.....
Its just essay #2 for my English 103 class (**Last english class as labeled by non-english majors lol)
Sorry, this isn't aimed towards my admission essay or anything of that sort.....excuse the misleading title - "......My Essay Introduction"
lol Am I allowed to seek advice with these type of essays from these forums, or solely for admissions essay?
So much for being a new guy on these forums lol. Still, cant thank you guys enough for the help! |