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Old 05-05-2008, 01:36 AM   #5
giantsfan
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Join Date: May 2008
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i said that people do care too much about winning.


in my intro i had a quote from napoleon bonaparte. I said how his conquest for a french empire led to a european coalition against him, and he eventually was defeated

then for the body paragraphs
1- i talked about competition over jobs that led to race riots in chicago and la in the early 1900s
2- vietnam war. US desire to win led LBJ to send troops into a stalemate, resulting in unnecessary deaths.
3-personal experience. my baseball coach was overly competitive and yelled at me whenever i made an error, and this led me to dislike baseball (lol i made this up)

then in the conclusion i summed that up, then included the adage "who needs to win if u have fun?"
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