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Grande Antilles · 05-13-2008, 01:59 PM

This is the "most powerful essay that you wrote but will it be the most powerfull essay that the admission officers will read? What tell us that you did not actually have sex with the girl? Why should we trust you? By the way, waiting to have sex is not unique. In the catholic church in the Dominican rep. they preach abstinence and there are some young people who practice it. Have you do the virginity pledge? Do it then you can say something interesting. When you are criticizing the kids of your age who are having sex, what about the chidlren of the officers who will read your essays? Do you mean that you are moraly better than them because you don't have sex? What about then? Did they have sex when they were your age?

05-13-2008, 01:59 PM	#88
Grande Antilles Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: SEA- Future College Reject Posts: 241	This is the "most powerful essay that you wrote but will it be the most powerfull essay that the admission officers will read? What tell us that you did not actually have sex with the girl? Why should we trust you? By the way, waiting to have sex is not unique. In the catholic church in the Dominican rep. they preach abstinence and there are some young people who practice it. Have you do the virginity pledge? Do it then you can say something interesting. When you are criticizing the kids of your age who are having sex, what about the chidlren of the officers who will read your essays? Do you mean that you are moraly better than them because you don't have sex? What about then? Did they have sex when they were your age? Last edited by Grande Antilles; 05-13-2008 at 02:01 PM. Reason: You idiots!