| i'd probably give it an 8-9...
reasons for this are
a) the examples you provided, although extremely solid and relevant, werent detailed enough..it doesnt provide enough insight, i think
b) as you mentioned it yourself, the conclusion was really shaky..it seemed like you were waffling alot...avoid it!
other than that, it was a good read..with a few little tweaks you can reach double figures.... |