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hitler? clearly i had a different essay. mine was roughly on decisions (notice this isn't specific. i don't want ets to sue my ass)
pretty good into
1st body paragraph on cold war/cuban missile crisis
2nd, literary source, angels and demons, not so great
3rd, personal experience, again not so great
conclusion of 1 sentence...........
vocab: no big words, merely average
it was only a page and a half, too. there was great potential in the topic but i couldn't think of things quick enough.
i'm thinking 8. guys think a 9 is possible?
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