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1st ph- intro (good one)
2nd ph- treaty of Versailles (well developed)
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3rd ph- catcher in the rye (like 3-4 sentences, rushhed, badly developed)
4th ph- concluding (its ok)
So wut u think of it? A 7 or 8 is my guess
I had to rush cuz it took me like 10 mins to think of the examples... I'm not good at thinking under pressure >.>
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