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Intro: decent
1st paragraph: Am. Rev (well-developed)
2nd paragraph: Crime and Punishment (a bit rushed)
3rd paragraph: personal example (pretty well developed)
Conclusion: Solid conclusion: spent like 5 mins on it trying to use big words and ended with a punch.
What do you guys think? Btw, I used up all 2 pages, underlined titles, used a semicolon and a colon, and wrote neatly. I think I still got a 10... I always get 10s
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