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I think:
Intro: Brilliant. I incorporated Adam Smith into it.
First example: Pretty good I think. I'm a little worried that I might have been able to elaborate more. Plus I made up the book.
Second example: gas prices (gas companies and consumers) i'm worried that I may not have developed this enough and that it may go beyond the scope of the essay
Conclusion: Weakest part. Ran out of time but at least managed to get a basic conclusion in.
Used a few big words, but am afraid that I made one grammar error in the conclusion.
Overall, I'm praying for a 10 or higher.
Got a 9 last time.
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