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intro: Well developed, few good vocab words
first paragraph: very good transition and form, cuban missile crisis (gave historical facts/how it related to the prompt/effects/how it would be today without topic of the prompt)
second paragraph: Not as well developed but certainly high quality, aid given to north Korea in exchange for the disassembly of their nuclear plant
conclusion: two or three sentences, was kind of rushed but I think it tied it all in nicely
I used 1.5 pages, I'm not quite sure of my grade now after reading some of the self-graded essays on this thread, at the time I thought it was a rather good essay for the 25 minute time restraint
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