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I really enjoyed reading this. It's brutally honest. But it will get you rejected at any and every college to which you submit it.
- it's over 2000 words
- you mention masturbation
- you mention your dad's antisemitism
- you portray yourself as wealthy/rich
- you swear pervasively
- you talk about your brother ****ing his girl friend
- you portray yourself as antisocial when you describe how you reenacted anime scenes by yourself at school
Shoot for a length between 500 and 750 words. You don't have to lie, but you do have to write something that portrays you in a positive light, even if only 1% of your experiences portray you in a positive light.
On the plus side, I could see this being the first chapter of a memoir one day.
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