| anyone willing to look @ my essay on an extracurricular activity?
the prompt is to describe the value of an extracurricular activity, was wondering if i could PM this to someone to get some legit impact on it? the thing is, i'm not exactly sure what colleges want. are they looking for a thrilling, scintillating narrative that describes a scene in time from a particular activity which shows its value? or are they looking for something like an expository statement about the value of this activity and my involvement in it -- relatively cut and professional, simple, and to-the-point without many bonus points for thrill factor?
if some people can look over this for me and give me some pointers, i'd appreciate it a lot. thanks.
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