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Old 07-02-2009, 04:29 AM   #16
dawncoming
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i think maybe not. this sentence is somewhat too long. and a queer combination of "delicacy" and "toast"&"sandwiches." I think you'd better not try some bizaare ideas.just write how you feel and what you think.and the colleges will understand.
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