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this was a well written, grammer, and professional essay however both SAT and college admission boards have rules (which you might know)
ithink you have2b really careful in what you write if this is an admission essay
the admissions board mostly read your profiles whether they should send you2university (not even caring about domestic life)
if this was the SAT you have2limit what you write and iguess stay on topic (your examples were hearting-moving so you include some of them but write what the topic asks for)
and I'm sorry about what happened
from all that, you're really good at writing your life with expression with your family, mostly your father
Last edited by iBigBang; 07-02-2009 at 03:42 PM.
Reason: ifinished reading all of it and iwanted2change what I posted
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