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its nearly 2 and a half thousands words. its too long. i couldn't even get through 300 words. way too personal also. when you make it this personal, there is an increased risk of your essay sounding too "wo is me." ya too personal, I'd focus more on how everything has affected you and to not to get too detailed about your father's affair. plus the swearing, completely unacceptable. its excessive.
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