12-16-2011, 12:34 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2010
Posts: 228
| Decision: Deferred Objective:- SAT I (breakdown): 2340 (800R 800M 740W), 2140 (690R 760M 690W)
- ACT: None
- SAT II: 800s (Math II, Bio, Physics), 770 US
- Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.88 (rising trend)
- Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A, but I know I’m top 10% because of Cum Laude
- AP (place score in parenthesis): Bio (5), APUSH (5), Calc AB(5), Compsci (5), English Lit (4), Calc BC (5), Euro (5), Physics B (5)
- IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
- Senior Year Course Load: AP Physics C, AP English Lang, AP Stats, AP Spanish Lang, Compsci 3, Multivariable calc (kind of like an introductory course), 2d Studio Art
- Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Nothing major, but the usual NMSF, AP derps, and some more unimportant awards in math and art
Subjective:- Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Math Team (President), Tennis (JV and Varsity), Art Society, Political Club (President)
- Job/Work Experience: None
- Volunteer/Community service: 100+ hours library (lead volunteer)
- Summer Activities: 2 Summers of Biochemistry Research (sent research paper to Yale), Tennis, Painting and Mix Media classes
- Essays: Common App Essay: Amazing
Short Essay: Good
Yale Supplemental Essay: Amazing but I had a typo XD
Why Yale: Derp
Why Engineering: Derp (Not bad, but this is where I could have improved the most) - Teacher Recommendation: Probably amazing
- Counselor Rec: Amazing
- Additional Rec: Pretty Good, I think.
- Interview: It went pretty well
Other- Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
- Intended Major: BME
- State (if domestic applicant): OH
- School Type: small (<90 per grade) private, “Competitive” (Sends about 6 kids to top 10 schools, but I think we’re pretty derp)
- Ethnicity: Asian
- Gender: Male
- Income Bracket: 100,000+ (single child, two parents)
- Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): My good looks :P
Reflection- Strengths: Some essays, Recs
- Weaknesses: Lack of awards, Why engineering essay, and race. GPA could be a bit higher too.
- Why you think you were accepted/deferred/denied: I’m pretty average on paper for a Yale applicant, and I could have written a better why engineering essay. Also, there were a couple things that people didn’t get from my app.
General Comments:
Good Luck! Read your essays out loud to see any typos.
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