| *-*!First Essay Ever!*-*
Hey everyone this is my first essay ever, and I, by no means, plan on using it as my final college essay. I just need to know what is wrong with it and how I can improve? Please I'm relying solely on CC to solve this essay problem for me, and I promise if you give me input (I know there's tons of issues) I will read your essay and even though I can't correct it's general look, I can help with spelling, grammar, and writing style.
I would appreciate ALL help in this matter!!!!
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