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Old 10-23-2007, 11:29 PM   #1
Chrimaya
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Join Date: Oct 2007
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*****Very Very Very Special Case Applicant*****

GPA: B with mostly AP and Honors classes (very low, but I was struggling w/ an eating disorder and family problems at this time)
SATs + ACT w/ writing): Taking very soon (What should I aim for to be even considered for the below colleges?)
Race: African American/ Native American female
I come from a large school in Upstate NY
Graduating class: 732

Recs:
Superintendent
Regional Rep. from Congresswoman Gillibrand's Office (or even Gillibrand herself)
New Visions* professor
Pres./CEO of the Capital District YMCA
My Kiwanis advisor/ former teacher
My Lit. Classics Honors teacher
My Bio. honors teacher
(PS: I know all of these people VERY well)

AWARDS RECEIVED/RECOGNITION

Who’s Who Among American High School Students: 2005-2006

Selected to participate in the 2006 Howard University Center of Excellence, “Future Health Stars of America” Program. This program is extremely competitive to get into. See http://www.cpnahs.howard.edu/ctr_exc...NRAPPL2007.pdf for more information.

Youth Advance ambassador: 2006- attended national convention at Homewood Suites Hotel, Great Valley, Pennsylvania

Recipient of two Time to Shine awards: 2005- Recognition by teachers for doing noteworthy acts of kindness and service within the school

Awards by Faculty- Freshman and Sophomore Nominee: 2004-2005 and 2005-2006

Poetry.com: Semi-Finalist and Recipient of the Editor’s Choice Award: April 2005

Johns Hopkins Talent search: 2004- took the SATs at the age of 12-13 for the program

(Duke University Talent search: 2002)

(Poem Published in the Anthology of Poetry by Young Americans 2001)

Nominated for the 2007 N. C. T. E. (National Council of Teachers of English) High School writing competition at the local high school level. I went on to become one of the five finalists.

Honor Roll Student

Cordially nominated to attend the 2007 National Youth Leadership Forum of Medicine

Selected to attend and honored at the University at Albany’s 2007 High School Achievers of Color Luncheon

Invited to participate in the 2007 Presidential Classroom Program in Washington DC

Invited to attend the 2007 Junior Statesmen Summer School program

Recipient of the Capital District YMCA Outstanding Youth Award and $1,000 scholarship

Recipient of the prestigious Frederick Douglass and Susan B. Anthony Award in Humanities and Social Sciences- Recipient is also considered for a $30,000 scholarship to the University of Rochester

Nominated to become a People to People* Student Ambassador- 2006/2007

Student Honoree at the 2007 Black and Latino Achievers Award Ceremony: Keynote Speaker: The People's Court Judge, Marilyn Milian

Selected to participate in the highly competitive 2007-2008
New Visions Health Careers Exploration program during my senior year of high school (http://www.bocescareertech.org/pdfs/...ionsforweb.pdf) Additional supplement for colleges will be provided. This program is VERY VERY VERY hard to get into. It was a miracle that I got in, but I am getting straight As. Also, a Harvard admissions officer told me that they look @ programs like this more than GPA and/or class rank.

*People to People is an educational exploration program founded by President Dwight D. Eisenhower. Honorary chairmen include: President George W. Bush, Presidents Lyndon B. Johnson, President Richard M. Nixon, President Gerald R. Ford, President Ronald W. Reagan, President George H. W. Bush, and President William J. Clinton

EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES

Co- founder and active member of the Southern Saratoga YMCA Black and Latino Achievers Program- I am currently serving as President for the 2007-2008 school year

SFA Senate (student government): 2004-2005- elected by the student body as a freshman

Visions Committee- Student Team: 2004-2006- a prominent group within the school consisting of a few selected students, administrators, the Board of Education, the principle of the high school, and the superintendent of schools, Dr. L. Oliver Robinson

Key Club:
2005-2007- 100% community service- Northeastern Regional Food bank, hosted Haunted House at Jonesville Fire station, Roadside cleanups, hosted Thanksgiving dinner for senior citizens at our high school, hosted coat drive at our high school, participated in Adopt- A- Family through the AIDS Council. We are still very busy!
- Became the President of Key Club for the 2006-2007 school year as a sophomore
- Currently serving as Lieutenant Governor for District 17 Key Clubs (one of the highest positions a member can obtain in the organization; this position is very demanding and requires exemplary leadership skills)
- I am also the Chair of the Key Club Reactivation Committee for the 2007-2008 service term

Speech and Debate / Member of the National Forensic League: 2005-2007- Speech team- Oral Interpretation, Humorous Interpretation, Duo Interpretation, and Dramatic Interpretation: I currently hold a degree with an "Excellence" distinction. I have qualified for State championships in the past, won many 1st place trophies and have competed at Columbia University and Yale University.

Shen Pen: 2005-2007- Staff writer for the school newspaper- I have had an article in every issue since sophomore year. I was selected to become a Columnist for the 2007-2008 school year. Very rare.

Southern Saratoga YMCA Teen Leaders: 2004-

Southern Saratoga YMCA Youth and Government: 2004-

Saratoga Sparks AAU basketball: 2004- “B” Team on an acclaimed girls AAU basketball program; it was my first year playing basketball when I made the team

Southern Saratoga YMCA youth basketball 2007- I currently co-coach middle school girls along with Mr. James J. Celestine

Clifton Park Commons Youth Soccer League: 2004

Albany Church of Christ youth/service group: 2004-2007- 100% community service- Northeastern Regional Food bank, Shut-in visits, work in soup kitchens, yard cleanup for elderly, etc.

Member of the Albany Church of Christ Youth Committee

Ohio Valley University Bible Bowl participant: 2004-2007- travel to West Virginia to compete with hundreds of churches on a book in the bible; this year: Exodus

Participant in the 15-Love tennis program where I was able to meet Venus William

Taught Pre K-K bible school class at Albany Church of Christ- 2004- Fall 2006

Member of the Shenendehowa Leo Club- 100 % local community service (mainly within the school

Member on the Southern Saratoga Board of Managers. I am currently serving as the Teen Representative on the Program Committee.

VOLUNTEER EXPERIENCE
I volunteer on a regular basis with :

The Regional Food bank of Northeastern New York
The Southern Saratoga YMCA
The Capital City Rescue Mission
HATAS
Key Club- various activities
Albany Church of Christ youth group

WORK EXPERIENCE

Coordinator of Recreational Services at the Schenectady Church of Christ Vacation Bible School- 2005

Congressional internship with Rep. Kirsten Rutnik Gillibrand, New York's 20th congressional district in the United States House of Representatives. Gillibrand is the first Democrat to represent the district since Edward W. Pattison in 1978 and the first woman to represent the district.
- 2007

Financial Service Associate at Capital Communications Federal Credit Union- June 2007-August 2007


I will be applying to:

Harvard
NYU
Dartmouth
University of Rochester
Howard (legacy/ safety)

Once again, my GPA is low, but I was struggling with a serious illness, that nearly killed me, in addition to other factors. I don't know if it will help, but Affirmative Action could also play a part in getting me into a top college. My sister goes to Cornell and my family has a 3 more kids to ship off to college. What do you think my future has in store for me? I hope to someday become a hospital administrator.

ps: sorry for any bad grammar. It's late and I have tons of NV homework.

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