Thank you, I will pay attention to essay structure.
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These are many less interesting events that associate with a great events
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It's my typing error. It should be "There are ... "
You changed to ".. that we associate with ... "
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These are many less interesting events that INSERT 'WE' associate with a great events.
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I don't think it's suitable because inserting "we" changes the meaning of original sentence. A big event involves a lot of less interesting events, but many aren't aware of them. Inserting "we" means that people are all aware of them.
I looked up in dictionary:
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associate sb/sth (with sb/sth) to make a connection between people or things in your mind
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My correction: "There are many less interesting events that are associated [
by the people ] with a great events."
But I'm wondering if it's right. "Associate" means make that connection IN YOUR MIND. Hence using " ... that are associated with ..." will mean that "those less interesting events are involved, and ALL people are aware of them". Is that true ?
What is the best correction ?