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art_star · 01-10-2008, 02:42 PM

I do realize the deadline is past and that I've submitted my application, but I just got a late critique for my "Why Cornell?" essay saying that it "barely qualifies for a first draft."

Although I do respect this person's opinion, she is the only one that has read my Why Cornell? statement so far. So, I'd like to have some other opinions on it as I, frankly, stand by my writing. Please comment here if you want to give my statement a look and will respond back.

01-10-2008, 02:42 PM	#1
art_star Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NYC Posts: 790	why CORNELL? short answer. I do realize the deadline is past and that I've submitted my application, but I just got a late critique for my "Why Cornell?" essay saying that it "barely qualifies for a first draft." Although I do respect this person's opinion, she is the only one that has read my Why Cornell? statement so far. So, I'd like to have some other opinions on it as I, frankly, stand by my writing. Please comment here if you want to give my statement a look and will respond back. Last edited by art_star; 01-10-2008 at 02:48 PM.