does my essay have racist undertones?

bluefooted booby · 10-31-2009, 06:52 PM

would anyone like to read it and tell me what they think?

decanela · 10-31-2009, 08:46 PM

haha yes i will.

Harambee · 10-31-2009, 11:08 PM

I'd give it a read

Dnerd · 11-01-2009, 12:47 AM

lol sure

*message too short*

lili92 · 11-01-2009, 12:48 AM

Obviously would need to read it....but if you hafta ask, be cautious

crimsonchin68 · 11-01-2009, 11:36 AM

sure, i'm always up for that

kafkareborn · 11-01-2009, 12:17 PM

Now you have spiked my interest. I'll give it a read. I've submitted my app to Wharton ED.

siattam · 11-01-2009, 12:35 PM

yes, I will read it

kafkareborn · 11-01-2009, 10:18 PM

... After reading that essay you have defiantly spiked my curiosity. So, just out of curiosity what was your SAT score ? I am most interested in what you got on the verbal section in particular. Where are you applying ?

storm18 · 11-02-2009, 03:35 AM

i will read it. message me

bluefooted booby · 11-02-2009, 07:22 AM

So is it adequate for the caliber if the schools I'm applying to? I'm considering Columbia, NYU (mom attended), UPenn (mom works there), tcnj, etc.... Sat 2160 reading 800 math 640 writing 720.

bluefooted booby · 11-02-2009, 07:23 AM

Response to kafkare: caliber of not if sorry

Dnerd · 11-02-2009, 07:48 AM

hey, I want to read it too.

crimsonchin68 · 11-02-2009, 01:54 PM

if you want another opinion i will be glad to give one

bandgeek05 · 11-08-2009, 03:06 PM

I'd love to read it. PM me