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Old 10-15-2012, 12:19 PM   #1
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Supplement question

Should the "complete one of the following thoughts" start by literally completing one of the following thoughts. For example:
B. I felt like I truly belonged when...

I am with my swim team. blah blah blah

or can I start off in a way that does not literally "complete" the thought? Ex:

B. I felt like I truly belonged when...

I feel comfortable when I am with my swim team.
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Old 10-15-2012, 12:48 PM   #2
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Good question. No idea.
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Old 10-15-2012, 04:48 PM   #3
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I have no idea. I think either way works.
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Old 10-15-2012, 09:52 PM   #4
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I'm finishing the sentence. It seems to make sense that way.
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Old 10-21-2012, 11:07 AM   #5
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I like your first statement. The "I feel comfortable is weird" because you are supposed to feel like you belong, which I suppose is the same thing, but sounds wordy to me.
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Old 10-23-2012, 12:05 AM   #6
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Well that was an example lol. I don't even swim.
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