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Old 12-09-2009, 08:02 PM   #1
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Wrote 2 Common App essays
I wrote 1 common app essay...didn't like it...wrote another... decided to revise the 1st... and now i have 2 common app essays.

I feel like my 1st essay portrays me as a better "fit" for Brown, but I'm not sure if the second essay is better. Would anyone mind reading both and giving me suggestions as to which one i should use?

Preferably no 2014ers unless doing ED. I want readers who will be able to get back to me tonight, by 9:45 at the latest if possible. In the past ive had readers say they'll help but they never respond back. I'm being very cautious so i will check previous posts.
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I can do it, already applied.
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Old 12-09-2009, 08:45 PM   #3
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ill read it i EDed brown
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pm'ed you lr2009
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Old 12-09-2009, 08:56 PM   #5
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pm'ed you izy2492. thanks both of you
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Old 12-09-2009, 09:04 PM   #6
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hey can you clear ur inbox
it says ur inbox is full and i cant send u a message
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