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I think it's a great essay; I just had to add about three lines to make it more representative of my life as a whole. It's practically air-tight; if I remove any more, the story will actually start losing critical information. I obviously can't do that.
Besides, my college counselor just responded to an email I sent her a few minutes ago with the essay attached. I asked her about this. She said that I should be fine.