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Old 11-22-2007, 12:16 PM   #1
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diversity or no diversity

I am doing an application right now- one of the 250 word limits is "What would you like us to know about you that may not be revealed in your teacher or counselor recommendations?"

I attend where over 40% of the student's parents are in the military, and 30% of that number is deployed in the war. Our school is very diverse because of the military, do you think that is an insight? If I explain how diversity has shaped my views and the like is it alright?

Or, I could talk about this one time I took a homeless guy out to lunch and sat with him talking for like two hours.

Any opinions?
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Old 11-22-2007, 12:23 PM   #2
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bummmmp.......
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Old 11-22-2007, 12:54 PM   #3
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I think the first option fits the question better. However, I might write my MAIN essay on the homeless thing. That's cool, too.
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Old 11-22-2007, 01:06 PM   #4
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I agree with montagne. Both are very interesting.
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Old 11-22-2007, 01:58 PM   #5
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would you consider the military diverse?
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Old 11-22-2007, 02:18 PM   #6
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Remember, the question is about YOU, not your school. I don't like the first one. It should focus on something that was important to you in high school, such as a program or experience.
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