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Old 12-30-2011, 11:04 PM   #1
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Emory favorite amusement park ride
i just finished writing my first draft of this essay
anyone willing to critique it?

prompt: fav. amusement park ride and how it shows my outlook on life
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Old 12-31-2011, 10:18 AM   #2
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bump? please
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Old 12-31-2011, 10:22 AM   #3
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I'll critique it.

Is that really the prompt, or is it an essay of your choice, so that's the prompt you gave it?
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Old 01-02-2012, 08:37 PM   #4
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bump anyone else ? i just edited it more
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Old 01-02-2012, 08:44 PM   #5
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sure send it to me (I am done with my app, so no worry, by the way you could give me
your opinion on my essay)
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Old 01-05-2012, 09:49 PM   #6
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bump bump bump?
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Old 01-05-2012, 10:28 PM   #7
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pm me...ill read it
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Old 01-09-2012, 12:36 AM   #8
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I'm pretty sure Princeton had a similar prompt a few years ago
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