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When asked to elaborate on one of my extracurricular activities, I chose football, because in all honesty I probably learned the most from it than any other activity I was apart of during high school, (aside from actual school of course).
When I read this sentence, it sounded awkward
"Football not only taught me self-discipline on and off of the field, but also courage and competitiveness."
Is this a good sentence? If not, how can I improve it?
Please help, I am applying to Fordham at the last second even after the deadline. Obviously I need all the help I can get.