Is this essay topic too risky or controversial?
In my freshman year, after the death of my grandfather, we went to the village where he had lived. I decided to be something like an element of change there, so I decided to find work there. I worked in absolutely decrepit workplaces with amazing people. after 3 months, I came back to the city, but instead of moving back in, I rented a two-room flat, a floor above my parents' house, who owned the building. I started a tutoring firm and did a part time job at a DVD store, which gave me enough money to pay rent, and enough start up money to start a youth organization. (i still had food at my parents' but renting my own place gave me a feeling of independence)
The main thing that I want to imply/talk about is my drive to be the best I could be and make my mark, all of which started after that trip, during which I had some sort of an epiphany (sounds cliche but it's not actually).
Would this be too risky or something?