"Finding My Voice" - Critique it please?

rkim1993 · 07-25-2012, 11:05 AM

I had previously posted my essay publicly like an idiot... I hope no one stole it...

Anywho... I am seeking people who can read it and critique it.
I'll PM it to you.

Thanks!

rkim1993 · 07-27-2012, 07:50 PM

BUMP! 10char

cocoforcollege · 08-02-2012, 07:40 PM

The title sounds kinda cliche. Either way, I'd be willing to read it, though I'll be applying this year too. I already finalized my essay topics though, and I'm WAY too lazy to rewrite. It's your call. I'm up to the task though

Luminiz · 08-03-2012, 04:33 PM

ill read it

noleyzizi · 08-04-2012, 12:33 AM

I'll read it...