College Confidential
» CC HOME » FORUM HOME

  College Confidential > College Admissions and Search > College Essays
Can someone check out my essay? Can someone check out my essay?
New User
Register FAQ Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Welcome to College Confidential!
The leading college-bound community on the web
Join for FREE now, and start talking with other members, weighing in on community polls, and more.

Also, by registering and logging in you'll see fewer ads and pesky welcome messages (like this one)!
Register Now!
Discussion Menu
»Discussion Home
»Help & Rules
»Latest Posts
»NEW! CampusVibe™
»Stats Profiles
Top Forums
»College Chances
»College Search
»College Admissions
»Financial Aid
»SAT/ACT
»Parents
»Colleges
»Ivy League
Main CC Site
»College Confidential
»College Search
»College Admissions
»Paying for College
Sponsors
SuperMatch - The Future of College Search!
CampusVibe - Almost As Good As A Campus Visit!
Reply
  		Thread Tools
Old 10-14-2012, 04:08 PM   #1
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2010
Posts: 153
Can someone check out my essay?
Im applying to some of the nation's best universities, and I really need to make sure that this essay is really good..

Would anyone like to take a look at it? This is probably my 4th draft lol...
volynsal1 is offline   Reply   
Old 10-14-2012, 04:25 PM   #2
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2010
Posts: 153
ill pm it to you!
volynsal1 is offline   Reply   
Old 10-14-2012, 04:43 PM   #3
New Member
 
Join Date: Mar 2012
Posts: 20
i'll give it a read. pm me
DangoDango is offline   Reply   
Old 10-14-2012, 05:03 PM   #4
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Posts: 245
Send it over! I'll take a look!
pinkpokadot07 is offline   Reply   
Old 10-14-2012, 08:06 PM   #5
New Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 26
If you would do the same for me!
gkarlovich is offline   Reply   
Old 10-14-2012, 09:59 PM   #6
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2010
Posts: 153
thanks guys! anyone else??
volynsal1 is offline   Reply   
Old 10-14-2012, 10:47 PM   #7
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 30
Pm me. Ill give you some feedback
timewizard is offline   Reply   
Old 10-15-2012, 12:44 AM   #8
New Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2012
Posts: 4
Essay look over
I need mine looked at too. I posted it, then was told that it wasn't so smart. What is PM to someone and how can I get some to look over mine, it's been years since I have written one!

Great I have figured it out, but because I don't have 15 posts I cannot pm. Help! This essay is due Wednesday.
Last edited by Mechanicman; 10-15-2012 at 12:46 AM. Reason: answered q
Mechanicman is offline   Reply   
Old 10-15-2012, 09:33 PM   #9
Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2012
Location: Harvard '17
Posts: 314
Eh, I can give it a critique if you like.
Adodie is offline   Reply   
Old 10-16-2012, 01:22 AM   #10
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 30
Pm me, Ill give it a look.
timewizard is offline   Reply   
Old 10-16-2012, 01:38 AM   #11
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2010
Posts: 153
thank you! im basically scared that im sounding really boring and that my ending is too cliche
volynsal1 is offline   Reply   
Reply

Bookmarks

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »
Thread Tools



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 09:21 AM.
Contact Us - College Discussion Classic - College Confidential Home - Text Version - Privacy Statement - Top



Copyright 2001-2011, Hobsons, Inc., All Rights Reserved