My name is Marc, we haven't met but I thought I'd reach out after seeing your post. I direct a consulting firm that specializes in critiquing admission essays (mostly for graduate schools but for undergrads as well) We're good at what we do and I think we can be of some help to you. You can go to 6 Cambridge Ave
to check us out, or email me at email@example.com
, either way, I'm here to help!
*I am fairly new to the site so CC hasn't allowed me to PM yet, email me if you want to discuss in more detail!