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Old 11-08-2012, 05:43 AM   #1
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Help with supplement essay! (Please help, I'm really struggling!)
If anyone would be willing to read my Bowdoin supplement essay, I would be incredibly grateful, as I'm really struggling with it and I'm not getting much help from anyone in terms of editing/revising.
I'd be more than happy to exchange essays as well if anyone has something they need help on too (:
Thanks so much for any responses!!
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Old 11-08-2012, 01:13 PM   #2
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Sure! I'll read it if you can read my supplement for my ED college (deadline got extended for 1.5 weeks due to the east coast storm).
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Old 11-08-2012, 02:06 PM   #3
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I'll take a look . . . PM the essay, the prompt, and what kind of feedback you're looking for.
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Old 11-10-2012, 01:17 AM   #4
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Thank you so much everyone (: I sent you the essay

FateGoneAwry, pm me your essay back
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Old 11-12-2012, 02:12 AM   #5
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Would anyone else be willing to help?
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Old 11-12-2012, 05:26 PM   #6
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Hey Deblerg,
My name is Marc, we haven't met but I thought I'd reach out after seeing your post. I direct a consulting firm that specializes in critiquing admission essays (mostly for graduate schools but for undergrads as well) We're good at what we do and I think we can be of some help to you. You can go to 6 Cambridge Ave to check us out, or email me at marc.stones@6cambridgeave.com, either way, I'm here to help!
-M.S
*I am fairly new to the site so CC hasn't allowed me to PM yet, email me if you want to discuss in more detail!
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Old 11-12-2012, 06:07 PM   #7
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I'll take a look at it! PM me.
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Old 11-13-2012, 11:12 AM   #8
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Thank you so much everyone! (:
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