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Old 11-10-2012, 01:21 AM   #1
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Anyone want to read my UC essay?

I need help with my UC essay, but my english teachers are too busy. One of my English teachers is going through pregnancy too..

Anyways, can someone read my essay and give me constructive criticism? I'll message it to you.

Much appreciated and be harsh if that's easier.
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Old 11-10-2012, 02:04 AM   #2
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Sure, feel free to message me! I hope you don't mind if I'm brutal xP
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Old 11-10-2012, 02:09 AM   #3
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Sure, pm me!
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Old 11-10-2012, 02:26 AM   #4
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Sure! Pm.

Sent from my HTC One X using CC
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Old 11-10-2012, 04:00 PM   #5
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Thanks guys! ill send it in two hours because im still editting myself.
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Old 11-11-2012, 04:54 PM   #6
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yes, i can read it for you, PM me
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Old 11-11-2012, 08:59 PM   #7
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I'll give it a read and help out if you'd like!
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Old 11-12-2012, 02:06 AM   #8
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I'll read it for ya!
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Old 11-13-2012, 01:19 AM   #9
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I'll read it if you still need more feedback on it
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Old 11-13-2012, 02:04 AM   #10
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I'd like to but I cannot use PM...
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Old 11-13-2012, 07:11 PM   #11
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why cant you use pm?
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Old 11-13-2012, 08:24 PM   #12
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Finished and gave you comments via CC email. He can't pm because he does not have 15 posts on the forum. That's also why I sent it via CC email. Tell me if you don't receive it.
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Old 11-14-2012, 06:56 PM   #13
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ohh okay. ill just send it thru email for him.

Thanks for your comments drakorising, it was really helpful!
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