| Feedbacks on my Personal Statement?
Hi everyone,
I am a senior high school student in Vietnam with a dream of pursuing an education at a liberal arts college in the US. I am putting together my ED application and finishing up my application essay/personal statement . I have the final draft ready and I would be very appreciated if someone could read through it and leave some comments/feedbacks to make it better. Feel free to comment on anything that you find can be improved, including topic, structure, word choice, grammar, etc.
Please simply reply to this post or send me a private message; I would PM you with my personal statement. Your help means a lot to me as this school is my dream school. The ED application deadline is midnight on 11/15, so please get back to me at your earliest convenience.
Thank you very much for your time and look forward to your response!
Hanh Pham
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