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Feel free to PM me. My essay's pretty cliche, but I tried my best to make it different from everyone else's. It's essay prompt #1: Describe your world. I took it from my common app essay and tweaked it just a little bit. I guess I just need help trying to adjust it to fit the UC app. PLEASE BE BRUTAL.
If you need me to look over your essay I'll be willing to do it!