Yes, I agree that Anorexia is a mental illness. But I’m trying to focus on the “cause” of me being Anorexic and how I was able to pull through this personal crisis. The primary cause of my illness was my Perfectionism and stubbornness of thinking that I could make all the impossible, possible. And before, I thought making everything perfect was the route to happiness, while actually being grateful for what I already have and cherishing all the little things in life was the correct path. It’s not that I don’t want to strive for being better, it’s that now I know how not to overdo it.
Do you still think it’s inappropriate for me to have Anorexia as the main idea of my essay?
Please speak anything you wish to, I would love to make my essay better
Thank you so so much