Okay so I am mid mental break down and I don't know what to do.
I'm applying to the University of Florida and the application is due November 1. I drafted my essay two days ago, and it took me extremely long to write it (6 hours) but when I finished it, I felt like the essay truly conveyed who I was.
My problem is, when I sent the essay to my SAT Tutor/ College advisor, he edited my essay and I felt like while it did sound more formal, he had taken away a lot of my voice.
I do plan on including some parts of what he fixed for me, because it just sounds better, but should i still keep the parts that showed more of my voice?
Should i go for the formal version, or the one that includes more of my voice?