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nyuhopeful44nyuhopeful44 Registered User Posts: 641 Member
I already sent an essay in that I wrote, proofread, and had my mom proofread and approve. The thing is that I tried to go for "likeable" and now I feel that my essay is too silly or not understandable. Can someone just read it and let me know how you feel? I guess I can't do anything about it now, but still some feedback would be nice I guess

Replies to: Need feedback?

  • itsintheprocessitsintheprocess Registered User Posts: 164 Junior Member
    I wouldn't mind reading your essay and also offering a second opinion. I would also recommend having an english teacher read it over for any advice/grammatical errors
  • bjkmombjkmom Registered User Posts: 4,150 Senior Member
    With all due respect to the previous poster-- who has offered some great advice on other threads--- please don't send your essay to anyone who isn't an adult with a proven posting history.
  • nyuhopeful44nyuhopeful44 Registered User Posts: 641 Member
    @bjkmom thanks for the advice but I wasn't planning on sending it to other kids
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