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Old 12-25-2006, 10:30 PM   #1
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Critique my Common App essay, please?

Could really use a few suggestions for improving on this essay before I send it in. Let me know if you wouldn't mind reading it, and I'll PM you.

Applying to: Yale (deferred early--with this essay), Princeton, Harvard, Dartmouth, Penn, Brown, Williams, Duke, Bowdoin, Tufts, Georgetown, BC
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Old 12-25-2006, 10:39 PM   #2
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i can help :]
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Old 12-26-2006, 12:05 AM   #3
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send it to me i'll help out
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Old 12-26-2006, 12:58 AM   #4
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I will . It can be an exchange!
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Old 12-26-2006, 07:14 AM   #5
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i would love to read yoru essay. wanna read mine? lol
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Old 12-26-2006, 03:00 PM   #6
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i'd love to help
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Old 12-26-2006, 04:37 PM   #7
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Send it to me I'd be happy to help
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Old 12-26-2006, 05:42 PM   #8
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i'd be willing to read over your essay if you still need help.
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