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Old 07-09-2007, 07:13 PM   #1
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My Common App short answer?!

Would anybody like to read my Common App short answer on an extracurricular?

I want to know your opinion. What do you think? Impressive? Informing? Arrogant? Vague? Any comments would be appreciated!


I'm also having trouble cutting my essay down to 150 words. It's 180 right now, but I feel I'm being as concise as possible with my topic. Advice on that would be great too!

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Old 07-09-2007, 08:02 PM   #2
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pm me and i will
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Old 07-09-2007, 11:35 PM   #3
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pm me as well why not
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Old 07-10-2007, 08:07 AM   #4
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hmm will anyone else please critique me?
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Old 07-10-2007, 08:10 AM   #5
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I'll give up some time to critique it. You're welcome to PM me.
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Old 07-10-2007, 08:36 AM   #6
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oh thanks a lot!
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Old 07-10-2007, 11:06 AM   #7
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PM me if you want one more opinion
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Old 07-10-2007, 02:36 PM   #8
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It's getting pretty good! thanks a lot guys

anyone else willing to??
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Old 07-10-2007, 02:48 PM   #9
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me! 10 char
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Old 07-10-2007, 08:23 PM   #10
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i'll proofread it, pm me
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Old 07-10-2007, 09:13 PM   #11
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I'll read it pm me.
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Old 07-10-2007, 09:17 PM   #12
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yes me too ^^
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Old 07-11-2007, 01:46 AM   #13
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If you don't mind the fact that I'm a high school senior, feel free to PM it to me and I'd be happy to give my feedback.
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Old 07-11-2007, 08:04 AM   #14
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thanks a lot everyone! I believe my essay is in its final steps...anyone want to read over it?
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