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Old 08-30-2007, 05:22 PM   #1
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please critque this very rough draft, tear it apart if you want!!!
I am in the beginning stages of writing my college essay. I just wrote this in about an hour. Its just a start. Please give me comments on how I can improve it or if you think the topic is bad all together. I can PM it to you upon request.


Thanks in advance i really appreciate it!!


Eric
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Old 08-30-2007, 07:31 PM   #2
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anyone????? please
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Old 08-30-2007, 10:43 PM   #3
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If you want some feedback, just drop me a pm.
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Old 08-31-2007, 01:59 AM   #4
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send it over.
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Old 08-31-2007, 04:31 AM   #5
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I'll try my best, send it in.
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Old 08-31-2007, 04:31 AM   #6
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yeah, i'll take a look
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Old 08-31-2007, 04:33 AM   #7
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Sure, I'll critique it. PM me.
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Old 08-31-2007, 10:58 AM   #8
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i actually started a totally new top late last night so ill send you that one which i think is better
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Old 09-03-2007, 11:02 AM   #9
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I'll take a look if you want~
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Old 09-03-2007, 03:33 PM   #10
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I'll take a look.
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