| Well - my essay was originally quite long (close to 1500 words), though I've edited it so that it's now roughly 750 words. The essay begins with an anecdote that illustrates the effects and consequences of living with an addict. Then it goes on to discuss the severity of the addiction (how it's caused me to have to work full-time hours during the school year in order to help support my family, among other things), as well as the results of her actions. Then it goes on to say what I've learned from the situation, how I've overcome adversity, how I don't have any ill-will toward my mother, etc.
I've had a few people read it, and the consensus seems to be that it's well-written. It truly is one of the most defining moments of my life, because it had such an impact on it. When your parent gambles away enough money to thrust your family into bankruptcy, and then as a 6th grader you're forced to work to support your family, it's profound. | 
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