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Old 10-09-2007, 11:00 AM   #1
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Diversity and Why? Essays. Please Critique!
hi im applying to UMich- Ann Arbor, and was wonder if anyone would be willing to read my essays.
I'm worried about both my essays sounding very cliche.

constructive feedback would be highly appreciated.
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Old 10-09-2007, 12:56 PM   #2
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Hey, I'm the Newspaper Editor at my school.
I'd be willing to read it over if you'd like.
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Old 10-09-2007, 04:03 PM   #3
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I'm in the same predicament as you, dthizz.
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Old 10-09-2007, 04:09 PM   #4
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sure ill read ...it pm me
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Old 10-09-2007, 07:11 PM   #5
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I'm not applying to UMich so any of you that want to PM it my way, I wouldn't mind giving it a read-through.
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Old 10-10-2007, 11:24 AM   #6
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hey ill read your essay
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Old 10-10-2007, 02:55 PM   #7
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I'll read it. PM me
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Old 10-10-2007, 05:38 PM   #8
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sure I'll read, I already sent in my UofM essay..which school are you applying to?
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Old 10-16-2007, 03:32 PM   #9
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Actually things on my list have just changed. I AM in fact applying to UMich.


I'd still be willing to read it over for you if you'd like, but seeing as my own is currently in the works, you may feel otherwise.
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Old 10-18-2007, 05:22 AM   #10
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It has to be a well constucted essay, U mich is very selective. PM me
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Old 10-18-2007, 05:36 AM   #11
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Sure, I'll give a shot. PM me.
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Old 10-18-2007, 10:19 PM   #12
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ill read it, pm me
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