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Old 10-16-2007, 04:33 PM   #1
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an essay about storks. please read.

i want to know what my essay would say to someone who has never met me (which would be you). PM please!
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Old 10-16-2007, 10:53 PM   #2
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Glad to help you. Email me.
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Old 10-17-2007, 10:21 PM   #3
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You have an impressive talent in telling stories. All you have to do is to tighten the essay up, or refine the paragraphs except the last one which is excellently stated and a powerful ending. Do you have a limit on words ?
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Old 10-17-2007, 10:33 PM   #4
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I would like to read it, einnoc!!! PM me
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Old 10-17-2007, 11:09 PM   #5
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If it's not a problem, I'd be happy to review it.
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Old 10-18-2007, 01:59 AM   #6
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i'd like to critique it, pm it to me.
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