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Please Help Edit my Common App Personal statement!
I've been working on it for quite some time and am planning to send it to my ED school very soon (Johns Hopkins.) It's about my experience at a nursing home and is entitled plastic baby. I've cut it down to around 700 words but for some reason the middle of the essay is riddled with commas ruining the flow. Someone please help me. PM
bump. Anyone else? Please, I would appreciate any help because I need to apply ED soon. I just need other people's perspectives on the essay to see if it's powerful or not.