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Old 10-27-2007, 09:42 AM   #1
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Two new revised essays
Just revised two of my essays, and I am curious as to how they would make a reader perceive me. I am looking for comments more on the emotional/visceral impact, not necessarily grammar, though that would be nice as well. Thanks!
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Old 10-27-2007, 10:11 AM   #2
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i'll read em, pm me.
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Old 10-27-2007, 12:48 PM   #3
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Thanks naderboy! Still need help. I really really need help cutting these behemoths down. Both essay sare between 750-1000 words! AGH!
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Old 10-27-2007, 01:46 PM   #4
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I'll read your essays.
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Old 10-27-2007, 02:04 PM   #5
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I can read your essays as well.
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Old 10-27-2007, 02:34 PM   #6
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Gaffe i cannot send you the second essay because your mailbox is full. Thank you everyone. Please, id like more opinions if possible!
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Old 10-27-2007, 03:07 PM   #7
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Im up to it if you need.
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Old 10-27-2007, 08:21 PM   #8
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@Thegreyam: I have made some space; resend your second one.
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Old 10-28-2007, 12:27 PM   #9
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Gaffe O had to break my second essay into two parts, so I sent you the first, and then when I went to send the second part, you once again had too many messages haha. Thanks though! Anybody else?
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Old 10-28-2007, 12:32 PM   #10
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Yup... that's a problem of mine.

I have one space left for your essay. Send it before it fills up!
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